A very sweet and tender poem. Your emotions come across strong. It its clear here that you have a strong love for somebody who may or may not have the same feelings back, but deep down inside you believe they do. Soft and simple. I enjoyed the read. Nice work.

Cute!

Awww
I really liked this one! It was probably the best love poem you did. I felt the emotion and now I think with this you can build and make an even better love poem. Which then you'd need to tell me
5/5

You truly expressed your emotionas beautifully and I could totally relate. You both such thought and meaning behind all that you said which made it even more of a joy to read.

"When I thought all was loss"
^I think you mean "lost"

"Jealousy takes over when your with a girl"
"I miss you when your away from me"
^It supposed to be "you're" not "your"

Well done on this love piece.
I enjoyed reading it.
*5/5*
:]

Good writing, especially love the ending. once again, easy to relate to :)

This is really cute Shelb <3!!!!