Ok, people, I think that this poem of mine is rather crappy, so pretty please disagree with me.

Its too tragic sarah. i think u r a great lover of someone...

It is so wonderful and full of emotions..and I liked its flow and the way u wrote it as a whole..good job..keep it up5/5..

Wow. so beautiful and real...

This is a very poem, ur spelling the hearts of alot of poeple with this piece. very well done.