I love this . Well done.

Hey this is really nice ! love it 5/5

Thank u all so very much..dis is my first post in dis community..feels so wonderful to hear these words frm u all..

Interesting poem. has a bit of emotion in it. kudos to you.
Great write from Poetry Knight

This poem is pretty...nice use of words...keep up the good work

I have always found that the nature section of this web site produces some really good poetry and yours is no exception. I think you have found the right words to make the expression of your thoughts come to life and bring the real meaning of it to life. Good work… I liked the shortness of it too as you didn't drag it out like I even have a tendency to do sometimes.

Beautiful poem...there are was a feeling of lonliness in each stanza...
beautiful imagery...

"Can see the smiles beam
Amidst the clouds so white,
They erase off my pain
I smile in the evening light. "

^^ very beautiful lines...

keep writing...

5/5.
Nature,depicted in beautiful imagery.
The last stanza says it all-nature provides solace.Keep the good work going.

I really like it. The flow was nice and your form and word choices were really good. Very visual. Good job =]

Ooh.... So pretty... It has such a nice, subtle vibe to it. Great Poem. Honest Luck.

Sarah

What a nice poem ,great rhyme and flow. Beautifully written. Very descriptive
great job

It is a sweet poem but you used the 8 times and too many filler words. I think if you modified it a little it would make the piece much better. You still did a good job though!