Its wasnt excellend and it wasnt bad. It was fair. I liked the way you wrote it in a paragraph instead of stanzas, that was great but it was fair . 3

Thanks for saying what u think this is the first poem I have ever wrote

I think you poem was
gorgeous and really sweet
and expressive, especially for
your first poem.
It should never matter what others think,
as long as you say whats on your heart
and are happy with what
you have written
then thats all that counts.
I really thought this poem was
so sweet and just absolutely gorgeous.
It made me think of my boyfriend
who I love soooo much!!
Well done hun,
keep up the good work and hope to see
more from you soon, k :)
***take care***