Wow, really good. good flow, and is made me laugh a little, he he, see? lol. but anyway ur really good!

In my opinion, i think it is finished. i was great!

that is how i was before i was able to open up with other poeple and made friends and me and them made a mix of others like: emos, goths, prissy, exct.

I think its finished! i loved it! wow! great writing! 5/5

Hmm this one is unique piece! i'd really love the way u keep on repeating those words asking ur self, the imagery was absolutely well written and u had really portrayed ur emotions very well 5/5

Hey i think this is a very interesting poem
i like how u use the same line at the bottom of all the stanza... the flow was all so smooth...n the idea was very original

btw i was juz playing ard for the ending
but i dunnoe if u would like it
here it goes:

how much longer can i prolong?
Which clique will make me strong?
will you still be my friend
if even if my decisions are wrong?
so tell me where do i belong?