Comments : HEAT OF PASSION

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    5/5.
    i like the poem.It's romantic.and that's what i like to read!!
    and thank you for your comments on mii poems.i just happen to write what's going on on paper whenever i need to let things out.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    It was good i think... you wrote it well
    nice word choice, it something about it that
    just didnt hit me were i wanted it to..

    i read it and had a little affect but honey
    to me it wasnt strong enough... but it was good no lie.. =]

    i;ll give you a 4/5

    oh and thank you for the comment on my poem....=]

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This was really a great write,
    I love reading really romantic love poems cos
    it gets me thinking of my boyfriend who I
    love with all my heart.
    I loved your use of words
    and thought this poem was really dreamy and romantic.
    Keep up the good work,
    hope to see more soon
    love shell

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The time seemed to have frozen,
    With you here in my lap
    Lets feel the heat of passion,
    Before the time here has elapsed

    Just minor details:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    I like ur poem 5/5 I think good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    The time seemed to have frozen,
    With you here in my laps
    Lets feel the heat of passion,
    Before the time here is elapsed
    ----
    What a passionate stanza. sweet and wonderful
    This poem I found very nice I guess I need to read more of yours

  • 15 years ago

    by Bree

    I really like this poem..i gave it a 4/5 because i was a little disappointed that it didnt have more to it lol very well done