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by Lemon Square Bear23
Very nice write!!u got talent girly.. to say excatly waht u want, rhyme and make it a story type thing... thats soo cool... nice job keep it up! 5/5 always
Nice job you alot of talent keep writing!!! 5/5
Thatz sad but i like it but he still loves her doesn't he . keping writing like this it's great
Wow very sad i loved the imagery,i could see you falling in love and the heartbreak that goes with it.Super swell poem.5/5