Comments : Eternal sleep

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Now this is a poem. Rhyme and flow really good. And it's full of imagination not your standard ho hum write. Very cool write

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Great wording and rhyming Grant....but the message was a dark one indeed:( One should never ask for eternal sleep!
    Not my handsome friend in the prime of his life!

    Much love,

    5/5 Ingrid