I loveeee how this poem is written. I feel as if you were really writing this poem.. and first sighing out loud, then inhaling, screaming, and exhaling. I loved that little touch.. I thought that was really interesting. :))

This poem was really interesting. Isn't it amazing what you can write just looking at such a thing as a dandelion. I'm going to have to try that some day [ picking an object and see what I come up with.] It's a really good idea actually and gets your poetry juices flowin. Great job. I really enjoyed this piece a lot. The title is really great as well. :) Very fitting. Well done. 5/5.

Your visuals were great! It was so easy to picture everything that happened. Your poem was very well written and it was amazing how you could write a poem off of a tiny inspiration. 5/5 from me :)

I really enjoyed the inhale, exhale, scream, ect. parts it was different and creative. The quotes in this poem were also pretty original and I loved the pattern you seemed to have put all of this in. The last stanza was amazing for me! You rarely find poems with an ending that leaves you feeling relatable to the poem but you did it nice job!
5/5

I love the starting topic and the format way that you wrote this poem. It's not really like other poem is written way different it seems like when it comes to poetry you like to go your own way and not follow the path of others

That's a good thing be you people might like it
I know i do so far...

Great Work Keep up the inspiration btw No Negatives 5/5 Yes i did rate

Very well written...

touching and beautiful...
I like the way you have structured your poem... wonderfully describing each part...

"[Exhale] -- your enthralling scent invades my skin,
eroding away the last of any drive to stand.
(These tears will cry until my final disgrace.)"

^^wow... so hearfelt...

excellent write...
keep writing...

Great poem, i liked the sigh, scream, and stuff. 5/5

~tia