This poem is very sad and very well written. The flow flows gradually and consitent Well done keep up the good work :)

The only thing i'd have to say is when writing poems in the future try ti make you endings more dramatic or rememberable.

You want to leave your reader touched and inspired when writing these types of poems

Other than that very nice work keep it up! 4/5

Can you write more like these?

When tomorrow starts without me. superb line!

All your poems have a short, sweet and easy to read atmosphere to them.

Tis poem is amazing i was blown away i wish i could write poetry as good as you
you are a way better poet then me

YOUR VERY TALENTED I LOVE READING YOUR POEMS THEY HAVE ALOT OF EMOTION IN THEM AND YOUR POEMS ARE SOME OF THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ