First off oall this was a really good poem all in all.There were a few shaky parts here and there but,it was still good.Here are a few things you may consider changing though:

In stanza four it says "They warned me so much why not I listen"
I think it would sound better if it said "They warned me so much so why didn't I listen?"

I also noticed that you need another 'o' to most of your 'to's if that makes any sense. to=too

Also in stanza twelve there are some odd symbols that need to be taken out.

That's all I have to say.This was a good poem and I can relate because I just got out of a relationship like this a little less then a month ago.Keep up the good work.

-Amber-

All I can say is this poem was really great. I felt the same way before...Until I found this really great guy ;)
its very sad poem but with so much emotion.
great job. =]