Another chilling write.

Writing about a feeling, an undercurrent of suspicion, an air of distrust. Was it what he said, how he looked, or maybe whispers from others?

A mysterious write, wonderfully woven - leaving the reader to fill in the gaps.

Well done

Michael

It out. But then I turn around
and your right behind me
Wrong your. It's you're.

Your sneaking up on me like
You're*

Other than those two errors it was pretty good. It was a unique twist. I like how it was only at the end you said you were bound, gagged, and kills.

Four out of five.

Wow this is great, i've never read it this way before! :]