Again, i remember from myspace....this one..the emotions evoked at the very end, along with the imagery involved just totally ties the whole peace together and makes the reader totally enraptured and drawn in....amazing

"Your Intentions were probably good I know"
-uncapitolize intentions.

"In my dreams of you, you have taken a turn for the worst"
-im not really sure if worst is the right word to use, isn't it worse? i guess i don't knoww. lol.

"I wake up and you're not here and i feel as if my life had been cursed"
-always remember to capitolize your i's.
-had or has?

Overall a pretty good poem. I can tell the kind of relationship you and your father have. I'm guessing it's not a very good tight bond. But, this poem was really good. You expressed your feelings pretty nicely, I think. Other than the few things I pointed out, 5/5