Mhmm.. suure

Really good.

I know what you mean...good job 5/5

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Hey okay in the 1st line, it should be their. same with the bit about having "time to be their friends" other than that, its a great poem. i love the rawness; i know the exact feeling you have as you write it, partly cause i have it a lot - great writing

I love the fact ur really straight up in this poem! i love the emotions you put in it because through it you can totally feel it!!! I completely know how you feel and the feelings that are in this poem!!!! Great Job Keep up the Great amazing awesome work!!!!!!!

Yes! i like, simple and expressive, well done!

Nicko