Well well what to say here?
"The day will come
when all will fail
and the painting
of life will fall
so low down
below the earths surface,
never to be resurrected again!"
life can be fake and all painted with fake things, i liked that part

"If life cannot love,
then let me not live,"
wow, very brave decision and wise one but don't kill yourself we need you here ^_^

"Now rise my child,
for freedom from
all clutches be claimed.
Once again rise,
and declare your fame! "
very good ending, it's like the begining of new life and new tale

don't stop writting :)

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
Love

Truelyan intertwined beauty of things beautifully yet to come i love the form and flow keep up the good work

Gud1...