I love this poem, but it could use more explaining and such. It was based off a pretty simple topic if you ask me. But, that's maybe just me liking longer poems! Great work though, 5/5.

Very sad write...
each line reflects the pain and remorse in your heart..
nicely written but I found it too short(but thats jus my opinion)

overall a nice read...

keep writing...

I reallt like this poem! Normally I'm not into poems that don't have alot of rhyme...but the emotions in the poem make up for it. My favorite parts are the first two lines and the last three. The only part I don't like is where it says human emotion...i feel like the word human doesn't really belong but that's just my opinion. Overall It's good. :)
Much love
Jonda Beth