Wow short, simple, and beautiful 5/5 ",

Nice one,
have a go at my poems,and let me know by your comments.

Iv done all except held a real dove.. theone i held was fake. cool write
Kev.

I like this ine alot ...short but yet very simple...5/5 for me. :0

Hello
I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
You won my heart by commenting on my poem....i am expecting that you do this favour again
Thanks alot
Love

Aw i like this one a lot.

Beautifully written. short and sweet

This was short, but I loved it :]
5/5

Short. Sweet. and true and yes i have done it alll but i havent held a dove.