Veryy Good

Aww...so sad...

i hope she gave u the chance to 'be'....

<3 Aly

I liked but once again fromat and read this....The love in wich we once had, and think what needs fixing but i did like it!

A sad poem, but need to edit a little
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the love in wich we once...(should be)
the love in which we once
----Sorry it's habit:) I'm a teacher:)

spelling is important in order for others to take your poem seriously. And we all miss once in a while.
good job, well done

I luv this one. great flow. Reminded me of a song. haha great.

I love it. has a good flow!~~~ Great work. Keep it up.=)