"I've got sin shine, on a cloudy day, when it's cold out side, and the skies are gray, I guess you'll say, what can make me feel this way, my girl, my girl, my girl. Talking about my girl." lol

Great poem, keep it up. from a fan
Aaron

Nice poem !! Loved the rhyme and the feeling of love love in it. Well written.

This is really lovely,I like this kinda poem...light n cute ...good job darling,keep it up:)..

I promise I will keep your love
And never let anyone take it off
Say you will be mine

such a touchy and nice poem..... really so romantic and touched my heart. excellent piece of work

I v seen promises made n still how hard we try to keep it they break at testing times often...

Wish the promise f the author f this poem never breaks..

It was s nicel written I lost in this poem for a while..

Keep it up

Best wishes,

Karan

How come i didn't comment on this poem yet??

loved this poem but i felt the ryhme was kinda forced

anyway, good poem especially the last stanza; i liked it very much

Lovely poem, the rhyme was really perfect

I agree wiv SoSO AM SORRY to tell ya that your search is done ;) YO IT WAS GREAT :) 4.7/5