Wow i can almost feel the emotions that she feels in this poem. good job.5/5
*lesthat

Dang, thats pretty......not harsh but crapy! (the guy and ur cuz and the tooth pick skinny girl) 5/5 though

~tia

ps --- id go balistic if he liked her!

This is a good topic poem to write about and it was cute for you to write it about your cousin, but I think this poem should be in the sadness section instead of the love section it just the vibe of this poem when you read seems more sad then broken love.

Great work though! 5/5

Woow great poems that reallly has some meaning to it awesome job perfect 5

Whoa its sooooo gd ur amazing! 5/5

Love it

Love it
it has alot of emotion in it

Pretty powerful stuff
There is much pain
Pretty good 5/5

Kep rockin ya poems wiv these tocuhin words anda 5/5

Wow. Very poweful. The emotion is very strong. Great job.

Omg...amazing..
I really loved it...so full of emotions...
I can relate...
nice job...