That is so true great poem ur going in my favs 5/5

Wow...this is really good. You had an awkward rhyming pattern but it flowed really nicely. It's hard to pick out one good part because in order for it to make sense I would need to quote the entire poem haha.

I liked it.

All you wanted was the most perfect guy,
Though it's been known that it's impossible for quite some time.
So your sitting here all alone with a tear in your eye.
Could your prince really be a frog after all?
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there are a lot of frogs before the Prince comes along:) We just need to be patient.
You poem was great, reached into the heart of many of us..Nice flow:)

Wow that was amazing. I guess it is everyones dream to have a fairytale life, but there is nothing wrong with dreaming : ) 5/5

Wow....seems like u have had a lot to go through....
what got my attn was the title....how every little girl wishes for a magic prince to take her away to pure happyness...well unfourcantly sometimes that never happens. i liked the poem tho...it was different but still spoke to me.

Very good poem.

i liked it, i know how you feel (but with girls) haha

Starting off positive
yumy poem
i liked it
okay tips
a~ Line length again. It varies too much. It makes me stumble across simple words in akward places. either make them all long or make them all short
b* your vocabulary is decent. but it is all common language. go out on a limb and be different. change the pattern. add spicy flavor in. mix in some honey. butter up the reader.
c~ your ryhming still sounds forced. I think its easier to not rhyme and if it rhymes it does but you like rhyming so you got to make it work for you. figure it out.
good job!!

Lexie

Good job. very true. Many frogs come in go in life but soon you'll find your prince. Nice flow a lot of people can relate to this. keep up the great poems!