Great job. i enjoyed reading this one.

5/5

Short but it included the whole idea and I think this is kinda hard thing to do..Actually I'm not that good to do that so U got a great talent,keep it up:)..
and Keep smiling:)..

Lovely graphic imagery,haiku's aren't easy, you did an excellent job.Well done

Grant

Very beautiful. Wonderful dipiction of a storm setting, marvelous work.

This was very nice. I felt like I was experiencing it. your imagery is very good. Nice job all around

MaryAnne,

the fist two Haiku's in this chain were really strong and descriptive, but the third one could have been much stronger than it was.
If I were you I would have added one about the storm havind died down..something like that, or change the wording a little.
Overall it was a good Haiku chain!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid