You gave me a comment so i decided to read a poem or so, not alot of time. but i do in fact love this poem gave you a 5. you repeat several lines, but i think it shows the hurt and the pain, it shows the importance of the emotion that the writer is feeling. and the analogy of a puppet intertwined with control, always brings a thought about "master of puppets" by Metallica. A sign of complete mind control and what anyone is willing to do to break free from it. good job.