Mmmmmmm how about "lost soul"
hope it helps X)

5/5

How about WAITING... since you say in teh poem you re waiting, ??/

like it?

You could call it "Life's Forks"
i love this poem though and give it a 5/5

Excellent poem. Unique title. :] I liked that a lot. Ummm, the flow was excellent all together. The poem had no flaws as far as what I could see. It flowed along so amazingly without me having to stop once. Honestly, this poem is excellent and I literally have nothing else to say. Keep writing. :] Oh, one thing though. Just popped in my head.. maybe expand your vocabulary? You write amazinglyy no matter what though!... 5/5

This was amazing, i really liked how you picked a fork in the road of what way to go, thats how life is, theres so many ways to go to and from, and theres sometimes where you just really don't know what way to go because you don't want to take a chance of having it a mistake or not. I know how this is, I've been down a road that wasn't fun but then finally i took another route and found my way to a better place, hopefully you can do that to. Even if like you said in your poem that the one you love is gone away, remember you have all of us on this site to help you out on whatever you need. I really like your poems i have read which were only this one and the answering machine but your an amazing writer.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.