Loneliness is the hardest thing that anybody may go through..It really hurts bcoz U feel like no body would ever feel u nor even feel that u exist..So sad poem and through ur simple words,I could feel that suffering..

P.S.the contents of his note(U forgot the " T" of "this")
MY FAVORITE STANZA WAS
She rises from her grave
and pulls them under.
She burdens their soul...
And shows them what they did.
She locks them in a hole.
left to suffocate and die...
Good job ,keep it up..

Wow, this poem is really amazing. I just can't tell and express how I felt when I read those awesome words.
I felt that you were talking exactly about me.I am suffering from the misunderstanding of people towards and that's why I feel that I am so lonely in this world and no one could feel me.
And that is what you mentioned in this wonderful poem.well done