That was beautifuly written, fantastic job, I love the rhyming and the style. 5/5!

-mandy :)

Very good. i love it. amazing rhyming.

This is a really sweet poem?
the title doesn't make you think that it is a piece of love poetry however after reading the poem i was very much impressed short and catchy
well done 5/5

Once again, very beautiful and passionate. 5/5. Em

This one is good too...shot and sweet but alot of meaning

Again i like it. It's good and has a nice flow and messege.