Wowwwwwwwwwww...I really liked the poem more than U can ever imagine..U did a very good job..
U got a talent,plz keep it up:)5/5..

Wow awesome job. Like Lone Warrior my favorite line was
"Shadows crouch in corners"
Such powerful work...U r a amazing writer
-vino

Brilliant write very very graphic and thouroughly well written

Grant