Comments : Stale Faith [Faith Grown Cold]

  • 15 years ago

    by Lousy Eyes

    This poem is a good argument for one's belief. I like how you structured it, breaking it up so that the first letter of each line spells part of the title in brackets. You also capitalized the last two words of this which emphasized it as you're best point, discussing things "with people you can Actually See". Now I don't agree with what the poem is saying, but I do like how it's written. Well done and good to read. I got uber excited when I noticed the capitilization : )