While reading this piece i was like "omg! what a exact word!"
all your words seemed so exact to describe this feeling
i feel i can relate to this poem. it hurts when you realize that what you believed was trustig a person was actually blindly believing.

there were some slips through this poem:
I know not what to do with this heart -- maybe "i don't know what to do with this heart" is better?
''When every word of yours creating a barrier so secure" - i think it should be "created" or "creates"
i loved the title so much. it reflects the whole emotion of the poem. you realize these realtions and feelings were "bitter", but still you miss it all, that is why it is "sweet".
there are so many beautifel and meaningful details!
i really love how you combine the "bitterness" and "sweetness"
for example:
For a stranger had once stolen my heart, <-- stealing a heart is rather negative
And my life had turned to this masterpiece of art. <-- such a sweet and warm line!!

5/5

I feel that this is an awesome poem 5/5 of course it is great i love the fact that ever since we did that collab that you have upped your word play just brilliant i tell you

This was just breath taking. As if you perfectly describing the feeling. i can really relate to this, and so can much others.

**Never once thought that I this bond would break,
But times change and we're sometimes forced to wake.**
as if it were all a dream, and she was foolish enough to believe it all. i liked the word *bond*

**But was it my own fault that I became emotionally attached,
Was it really my own fault that this heart you snatched?** this stays my favourite part. where i got really touched. (if i clearly understood what you were syaing) she feels powerless, and as if it -wasn't her fault-
it amplifies that sensation of not being able to be in control.

**I silently wonder if you still recall who I am**
as if she was forgotten ? O_o" so sad..

**I know not what to do with this heart that cannot forget**
the heart won't be able. -trying to forget someone if like trying to remember someone you never knew.- its just not possible.

**And to the rest of the world I had bid adieu.** XD yay a french word lol . made me smile

very sweet poem, mixed with sadness.
loved it, going straight to my favourites.
^^ keep writing

--take care --

It was so touching dear fren.

U have portrayed the inner feelings so perfectly thru this love poem....

It can bring tears to the ees of that every lover be it girl or bo who loved... n still love to eternity....

Loved reading this one it was fantastic, fabulous, perfect.....

Keep writing,

Best wishz...

Karan

Hey,
Wonderful expression of feelings and moments we all have had (if not, then will have!!). You have expressed the helplessness and loneliness that comes with love disappointed beautifully. I recall this moment perfectly...
;)

Great poem Ash!
really great

so passionate

Through my reading to your poems i've noticed that you've gotten an incredible talent in bringing words that describe well and serve your poems ! this poem was perfect and i can say that you got a new fan of your (very expressive poetry).