Comments : Thousand miles apart

  • 15 years ago

    by S R P

    This poem portrayed the stages and emotions of love very well. I enjoyed it, though I do have a suggestion:

    Typically using abbreviations such as "u" and "&" and such are looked down upon. For a lot of people, especially those who do not use these abbreviations, it makes it harder to read the poem, and throws off the rhythm. If you cut down the abbreviations and use "you" instead of "u" and "and" instead of &, everyone, even the ones who typically use those abbreviations, will be able to read it a lot better.

    Great read overall! Nicely done.