That was really deep
good work 5/5

Beautiful i know how you feel. 5/5

This reminds me of three years ago. i met a girl named Ashley. she was cute and bright and funny. she was all i wanted. but she was not the origanal girl i went aft. it was her cousin Brittany that i liked alot.
They both came over to my neighbors house, cause it was a family thing that was going on. Well, they were all having fun, and then i got invited to there lake house for a week...
I'll tell you the rest in a pm.

So sad i hate it when relationships dont work
very gd at expressing emotions! this sounds so familar these r like some of my relationships very gd 5/5 <33 xxx

This is sad!!! is it true?
short but sweet! ill be looking at some of your other poems-would love you to check mine out too!!!
Aish
xxx

I Liked It ...It was good

Aww this remindes me of a boy i use to like alot i liked for about 2 years and we were really close and he would come over my house and we would you know.. bond lol but then we grew apart and we dont talk anymore/
your poems good i like it