E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T work.

You have such a positive attitude. Wow. It's really truely amazing to see. You will patch up the holes in your wings and fly again. I love how you used this. Because, it's truely how people describe things these days. Like they are a bird or something. I loved this poem because of the positive attitude that I got from the author of the poem. Great job. 5/5.

Clap clap clap. Very nice poem. n inspiring.
good work

I felt a good vibe from this work, a moving piece telling the story of struggle of trials and tribulations through life. Deep meaning with a positive conclusion, keep up the good work. -Matt

Wow this is beautiful, i love it!