Wow julia. this was so amazingly powerful. you can tell that you were focused when you wrote this piece because the emotions are just so PRECISE.

With fist against walls
This is the life she has been living
Bruises she can not remember
Getting or giving

^^ This was, by far, my favorite stanza.

AMAZING job babe.

Aww... i wish you wouldnt do this stuff i really wish you didnt ! ): makes me sad to know you do

Is this about you?!
It is so emotive and strong and focused!
Very very sad, i hope that everything works out.

This is a story
That should not be heard
Of pain, of tears, of cuts and burns
With no where else for a little girl to turn
^^This is probably my fav. stanza, thought maybe it could have come earlier but wow-fantastic work.