Comments : A Match Made In Blood

  • 15 years ago

    by WhiskeyGirl

    Beautiful.
    I loved this.
    So much love and passion, yet, dark.
    Three things i really love.
    Excellent.
    5/5.

    Sincerely, Sammie-Lee.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is something very weird! Well... but it's a dark poem so it's ok. Interesting and captivating... Nice to read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Chris

    Definitely something i don't see often. a dark poem yet at the same time a love. it's like every kind of poem mixed into one almost. creative, original and a 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Sign the contract of our love.
    And this is a match made in blood. "
    ``Dang, these lines were worded oh-so-perfectly. Left me speechless.

    "
    Deep bites into skin,
    Sensual touches.
    Nails scratching.
    This is our love in action."
    ``Wonderful word-choice.. Deep, sensual, scratching.. Gives the reader something to picture. Great imagery.

    "But this is what I see is perfect.
    A black wedding,
    With blood dripping down."
    ``A black wedding, with blood dripping down.. <~~ Wow, that was a bit deep :)

    "This is a match made in lovers blood.
    And its perfect. "
    ``Perfect ending, worded perfectly. Amazing. However, you'd want a apostrophe in it's because you want to say.. "and it is perfect." I know you know that, just a slight observation!

    `` Overall, wonderful write. Deep poem, but was well done. 5/5. Keep up the great work, dear. :)