Comments : By your side.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    This poem is much good , but too long i like tha fast rythm of it it si jsut beautifull but try to shiorthen and mind your paragraph structure if you stat with small lines dont go after to long ones

    it si a good one a 5

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel

    Thnks will keep that in mind x

  • 15 years ago

    by charles

    OMG, eyes welled up over that one! Exellent work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel

    Aww thanks alot x

  • 15 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    This brought tears to my eyes. beautiful :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael Verterel

    INTENSE IN THE BEST WAYS EVER...

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel

    Ty