This poem is much good , but too long i like tha fast rythm of it it si jsut beautifull but try to shiorthen and mind your paragraph structure if you stat with small lines dont go after to long ones

it si a good one a 5

Thnks will keep that in mind x

OMG, eyes welled up over that one! Exellent work!

Aww thanks alot x

This brought tears to my eyes. beautiful :)

INTENSE IN THE BEST WAYS EVER...

Ty