Comments : Emergency Exit.

  • 15 years ago

    by lisa marie

    Correct me if I am wrong, but I am assuming this poem is simply about death, but said in a MUCH better way than I have ever read...especially on this site. I actually really like this piece of work because again you have amazing word choice and you are very talented in creating a very real, but abstract scene.

    this is just awesome

    Death just another window
    Of gleaming opportunity
    In formless form
    Break free from perpetuity