I like this piece. You express yourself very well through the words you chose to describe it. You make a lot of good points and this was a very relateable piece. And it's always good to vent, esepcially through poetry :] 5/5.

Hmm, I'm not sure how I feel about this one. You didn't really have any nice poetic descriptions that I feel could have made this piece beautiful. Everything was just kind of said in a straight-to-the-point and blunt kind of manner. Also, I think if you were to put punctuation into your work, it would help with the flow a lot. Right now it's just one big stanza with no breaks, no commas to tell us when to take a breath, so it's like one big run-on sentence.

Sorry, dear. I just feel this could have been a lot better.

This organic rant evoked images in me of a heartfelt communication call, delivered while standing on top of a very high mountain; a heartfelt call from one individual out to the entire human race......

PS. "or its (it's) miserable"