I loved it because it showed emotion like: For letting myself fall in love.
For letting myself get carried away by some guy.
For letting him in my heart.
For letting him tear me apart.

^^it tells the reader how much pain you were in because you loved this guy^^

great job! 5/5

Beautiful
i loved the expresion through out the whole poem
i can empathize here
i have once felt the same.
but i will tell u from experience that it wont last long
we forgive and move on at some point
another will catch ur eye and u his
ur destiny is to be loved no matter what
but the times it doesnt really work are only times that u are meant to learn from
every failure has a lesson to be learned from it

Damn girl its reallyyyy nice!! keep up!
and by the way i hate love too