Comments : Molded adjectives

  • 15 years ago

    by David

    Your poems have improved dramatically kaila. this was superb.

    the flow and subtle particular word choice enhanced this poem to a level of FANTASTIC!

    loved the stanza:

    Gripping into my wrists, they want me to feel pain.
    Wanting to feel isolation, eyes reminding me of ache.
    Tears slip down my cheeks, burning like acid.
    As one slips onto my lips, ice overcomes me now.

    bravo, keep writing! :) 5/5 David