Comments : Those were the days

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Well, the last stanza doesn't really rhyme, but that's okay. You know, I never thought boys had cooties. I think I missed that phrase of a little girl's life. I loved this poem. It's going in my favorites, because those were the days. Reading it brought me eleven years back in time. My favorite part was this stanza:
    "when a kiss could heal a cut
    and a hug could heal a bruise
    when being mature was dumb
    and immaturity was all we knew"
    I loved the last two lines the best. Wonderful poem. 5/5