Wow, completely amazing. the thoughts and the way its written, leaves me speechless!. I completely agree though, I've been trying to write a poem like this for ages but never had the right words, yet you did it so well, great way to get the point across, and hey who knows, maybe people may finally listen.

But we are still sleeping,
In our materialistic minds,
And once things get out of hand,
We'll be out of time

Im filled with images of families vegging out on smart phones, video games, and tv instead of spending quality time together.

gosh...every word is so true. Beautifully written. You just put every scenario of today's world into words so effortlessly , yet so beautifully.
And i loved your works
truly inspiring:)

Bang! Wham! Mam!
Fabulous piece lady :)

Michael x