Wow. The words that you described in this poem are amazing and touching. I'm so happy that I'm the first one to comment on it! :) I would go back and work on the punctuation a bit and I would shorten a few lines in it, but that's just me. lol Overall, I thought that it was a really good read.

"but hey look different tonight"

should be "they"

and the format makes the poem very broken and slightly hard to read, try saparating the sentences more clearly somehow

the feeling behind the poem is very beautiful, 4/5