Wow thats so sad. ur a great poet 5/5

A very sad story im sorry for your loss. They are evil, and if they grab a hold they destroy you. I have written some poems about them iv had experiences with them and they are evil.....You are very talented for a girl your age you write brilliantly. thankyou for your lovely comments i find it easy to write about real things and to be totally honest.

This is great! but so sad! :( it is amazing!! :)

5/5

An amazing write about a sad and painful subject. I feel your pain through your use of emotion. I also like the mixture of three line stanzas and four line stanzas and how well you pulled it off while maintaining flow as well as you did.

Sorry to hear about your uncle. Drug addiction is one hell of a battle for someone to fight. I know, I use to have problems with drugs myself and it shows in some of my darker writes. It leaves its mark on everyone it touches.

5/5 Good job, and keep up the good work.

That is very sad. I am sorry that had to happen to your family. I am sure he is looking down on you hoping you don't choose the same path he did.

I thought i was reading about myself for sec,
I herd pain and understanding in this.
Though i was lucky and pulled myself up and out I still hear it calling me at my darkest moments.
keep up the good work.