Mmm,
it is small one , but 1 block , not good , split it into paragraphs,
and mind your rhyming it is good poem if you ix it good

Ok thxx for the comment anyway:)

I had a friend that had a boyffriend and he said "i'll be with you forever" and the next he broke up with her for some other chick.

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Yah i know ur right i had a boyfrnd who told me that and we broke up

Wow jana, your poem is really touching. I totally loved it.
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Well... I liked your poem. May be you can make it better but I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!