I think this is a poem about how good dreams can fade and simplicity remains no longer but the unwanted dream. Overall, i am generally quite happy with my poem.

~smile~ Hi there young friend. Your poem is not bad at all, but you could do away with all of the interpuction ( . , - etc) because that makes the poem look better;)
I am giving you the highest rating!

Ingrid

This one's short yet its thought is inspiring, I liked it ^^,

5/5

~Kenny~

Very unique and well written, and the message of the poem is made very clear! =D
Well done!

Very dreamy and very clever work