Very good poem, powerful meaning. There's just some things I'd change slightly to give it more flow. When you're using the coordinating conjunction 'and' it can sometimes help a flow and sometimes it can break it, in the last paragraph it's overused and kinda drags the words with it. You might disagree which is fair enough but I was wondering if this helped, it's only a tiny bit changed
Depression, is worse than any pain
Depression, isn't a form of insane
It's a feeling that is deep inside
When all you want to do is hide
Hide from the world, and everything in it
Yourself, your friends, just for a minute
Lock yourself inside from everything
And all the pain that it will bring
But just for a minute soon turns to forever
You lock yourself inside altogether.
You're not the person you were anymore
When you can no longer find the key to the door
I really like this. although i would like to act funny sometimes, most of the time i feel depressed and you are right. once depressed, its like quicksand. hard to get out of and easy to sink in further. i can relate very easily.
Your poem inspires me to write,
it tells the author to get out and
you may not understand today,
but from the door get out the way,
you don't know how or when
but if you want it open
someones bound to kick it in..
anyway good stuff you got there, insight. you got it right.