This was so good and true. I loved it. Very well expressed.

Very good poem, powerful meaning. There's just some things I'd change slightly to give it more flow. When you're using the coordinating conjunction 'and' it can sometimes help a flow and sometimes it can break it, in the last paragraph it's overused and kinda drags the words with it. You might disagree which is fair enough but I was wondering if this helped, it's only a tiny bit changed

Depression, is worse than any pain
Depression, isn't a form of insane
It's a feeling that is deep inside
When all you want to do is hide

Hide from the world, and everything in it
Yourself, your friends, just for a minute
Lock yourself inside from everything
And all the pain that it will bring

But just for a minute soon turns to forever
You lock yourself inside altogether.
You're not the person you were anymore
When you can no longer find the key to the door

Wow i feel like this is exactly what i'm going through youu expressed your self well. Great job

5/5

Depression is many things for many people. i think that you did a good job summing up that feeling. a very concevable metaphor that most people can agree with.

very well done
~Ben

I agree with Ben.
Great poem.!.Simple, yet perfect.!. Great Job.

Great poem! Could understand very well. Alot of emotions. 5/5

I loved this poem and I didn't find it deppressive but realistic, well.. for me.
It related to me in fact.
keep the good work

Wow that is exactly how i feel and i have depression. you captured it exactly right!

I really like this. although i would like to act funny sometimes, most of the time i feel depressed and you are right. once depressed, its like quicksand. hard to get out of and easy to sink in further. i can relate very easily.
Well Done
~Ben

Like the way you express that feeling.
Can just feel with the poem.
5/5 and also favourite (:

-blackstar

This is depression ..............thank you

Absolutely! And anyone who's suffered will be nodding their heads along to this.
All the very best and take care,
Ben

Your poem inspires me to write,
it tells the author to get out and
fight,
you may not understand today,
but from the door get out the way,
you don't know how or when
but if you want it open
someones bound to kick it in..

anyway good stuff you got there, insight. you got it right.

Well said. Short and to the point, you description is perfect.