I felt sick to my stomach when I read this...God. why are people so screwed up in this world?

Her hands rubbing around inside of his pants,
He was scared, didn't like it "please stop!",
Questions; what ifs, the cans and the cants,
His fear escapes with just one single teardrop.

^^ This was, in my opinion, the strongest stanza. it brought a knot into my stomach and the last two lines are beautifully phrased.

whoever this happened to..I'm sorry. I know that doesn't cover it. but that's the best i got. <3

Ohmigod. This is, such a strong, vivid piece of work. It is even more heart-touching, when someone you know wrote it. I know sorry's aren't going to do anything. But i feel awful for that person. No one should have to go though that. This poem, is so powerful. Andit is writen so well. I"m sure that this person is probably in tears. I'm just glad that they have someone like you that they can open up to.

Wonderful poem babe...i'm glad you could put this to words. Maybe it will help someone else.

I love yah hun...

Thats really sad it is really good to

Wow that is terrible but all over the place