Short sweet and very sensual. lol and a lot of ppl can admit they at work they have day dreamed of someone they want and long for.

trully excellent. i was smiling throughout the whole poem. i never wanted it to end. loved the start so much. great job!

5/5 David

This poem moved me, despite being so short. Excellent =]

This is a simple poem, yet very emotional indeed !

Short and adorable. I know how you feel. I know how you feel because you express it so well; as if every word were longing itself.
Post another soon?
-Krystal[:

Ive felt that pain before and it really does hurt when i was yr 11 i used to break inside when id see a happy couple