John,

You seem to have captured this magical, mystical feeling that flows from the rain that falls in the dark. I love to go for a walk when that happens. Due to the climate change it hardly ever rains here anymore, but when it does it is magical. The scent of the moist earth and the trees that come to life....
Bravo on the poem!

Take care,

Ingrid

Wonderfully effective...I do love the rain....

"Silent but galaxy deep."
Consider 'and' rather than 'but'....after all, the galaxy is silent 'and' deep.......'-)

John.
Such a wonderful effect the rain has on imagination and reality. You have woven an intriguing write once again. Beautiful work.

A very descriptive and imaginative piece, well written
5/5