Comments : A Decision

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Shall I be missed
    Will they care I am gone?"
    ``Maybe say.. "Will they care THAT I am gone?" But without that it still makes sense. I guess it just sounded better to me, lol.

    The title says it all. All these questions wandering in your mind and you don't know what you should do; what decision to make.. what decision is better than the other.

    Well done, this poem was great. 5/5.